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Hiya Reader,

I have an inaccessible loft window in my bedroom, and a few years ago I ordered a custom shade with a built-in solar battery, to be installed. It took a scissor lift. The shade worked great until it didn't...the solar battery needed to be plugged in to be charged.

Now, I'll be the first to admit that this may have been an eye dee ten tee error* on my part, but on the other hand, if that had been adequately explained to me, I would have known the solution...was not a solution.

Long story short, an electrician came over and, risking his life by balancing a ladder on a railing 33 feet above the floor, installed an outlet and plugged the shade in.

Problem solved? Well, not quite. Here's the photo at 2am on the first night.

Like a laser beam straight to the eyes, I tell ya! The issue has since been fixed in a series of events far too boring to go through here. But the whole process reminded me a bit of self-editing in writing: fix a major problem, create a new one!

*eye dee ten tee = ID-10-T = IDIOT

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